Essay 2 vs. Essay 1
I hope to finally understand this sythnesis process, becasue i thought I understand it, but really I don’t think i really got it. I hope in my final draft I will better understand it. I also think i need to develop my ideas a little better and not ramble on and repeat myself. I need to make clearer ideas and use more examples and be more specific. That is what I need to improve on in Essay 2 and beyond.